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[true_noir]

CHLOE BOUCHARD

This is Chloe. Sorry, I guess you missed me. Just leave a message and I will get back to you soon.

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[browbeater]

if you have any feedback on things i can change before i do this live... lmk. needed some unbiased opinions.

[true_noir]

I am confused, I confess. It is quaint, yes. This story about your brother. But, what am I watching?

[...sorry, Mako. She lived in a vineyard in the middle of nowhere France for 16 years of her life, and she's never watched Comedy Central in her life. "Lost in Translation" doesn't begin to cover it.]

[browbeater]

[NOTE TO SELF: MAKE SURE PEOPLE ARE FANS OF COMEDY BEFORE PITCHING IT AT THEM

he was not ready for that sort of feedback, and so he purses his lips for a minute before tapping off a response]

it's... supposed to be a stand-up comedy routine.

annnnd quaint wasn't exactly what i was going for there

[true_noir]

Oh! This is meant to be a humorous story in that case? I suppose it makes me smile a little. It sounds rather silly, after all. Why would he care so much about airplane food anyway?

I don't think I have ever seen stand-up comedy, or not much of it. The one time I tried, it felt like it should be more funny to someone from here? Does that make sense?

[browbeater]

yeah, it's supposed to be funny.

i think it would be funnier to someone from here-- i didn't realize you weren't when i asked... not that i wouldn't show you, i'm just trying to get some feedback right now before the big amateur night.

[true_noir]

Ah yes. You would do best to hear from people that might be there. I am sorry I can't be a lot of help.

[She also had, despite a sense of amusement and wonder in general, a bit of an underdeveloped sense of humor. She simply sought amusement, not necessarily laughter.]

[browbeater]

[at least... there was little chance she'd tell everyone about it, and it'd still be somewhat of a surprise. Hopefully.]

oh well. thanks anyway

[true_noir]

[No chance at all. She wouldn't even think of doing that.]

You're welcome. Good luck, or as they say, 'break a leg?' That is the correct saying, yes?

[browbeater]

that's more for theater, but i get the sentiment

[true_noir]

Well, in that case, perhaps I will see you perform one day? Like I said, good luck.